English102-60 Wickliffe
Thursday, February 2, 2012
Three Changes for Stephanie Blough
Make some of the sentences more clear.
Make sure the most important information is being disscused in the paragraphs.
Make conclusion more interesting.
Over all, your paper is GREAT!
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